My Immortal (Abducted by Grammar Nazis)

Chapter 8

Chapter 8

AN: stop flassing ok! if u do den u r a prep!

{Trans: Stop flaming okay! If you do then you are a prep!}

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Everyone in the class stared at me and then Draco came into the room even though he was naked and started begging me to take him back.

“Ebony, it’s not what you think!” Draco screamed sadly.

My friend Bloody Mary Smith smiled at me understatedly {I don’t know if that’s the right word here.}. She flipped her long waste-length gothic black hair and opened her crimson eyes. {Again, she was already awake then she opened her eyes.} Her eyes looked like blood because she was wearing contact lenses on. She had pale white skin because she was wearing white makeup on.

{Warning: Terrible, cliché and repeated backstory incoming.}

Hermione was kidnapped when she was born. Her real parents are vampires and one of them is a witch but Voldemort killed her mother and her father committed suicide because he was depressed about it. She still has nightmares about it and she is very haunted and depressed. It also turns out her real last name is Smith and not Granger. {Changing facts to support theories instead of changing theories to support facts…} (Since she has converted to Satanism she is in Slytherin now not Griffindor. {… Just why?})

“What is it that you desire, you ridiculous dimwit!” Snape demanded angrily in his cold voice but I ignored him.

“Vampire, I can’t believe you cheated on me with Draco!” I shouted at him.

Everyone gasped.

Draco’s POV-

I don’t know why Ebony was so mad at me. I had went out with Vampire (I’m bisexual and so is Ebony) for a while but then he broke my heart. He dumped me because he liked Britney, a stupid preppy f***er. We were just good friends now. He had gone through horrible problems, and now he was gothic. (Haha, like I would hang out with a prep.) {Did we need to know this?}

Ebony’s POV-

“But I’m not going out with Draco anymore!” said Vampire.

“Yeah f***ing right! F*** off, you bastard!” I screamed. I ran out of the room and into the Forbidden Forest where I had lost my virginity to Draco and then I started to burst into tears.