Correction list- Chpt 8

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Chapter 8

- Trans

- B’loody

- like blood that she was wearing contact lenses on.

- that she was wearing white makeup on

- Paragraph insert

- Griffindoor.

- demeaned

- POV change

- bi

- Censor

- POV change

- Censor (x2)

- my virility

- bust

Total: 15

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