My Immortal (Abducted by Grammar Nazis)

Chapter 17

Chapter 17

AN: I sed stup flming da stryo! if ur a prep den dnot red it! u kin tel weder ur a prep or not by ma quiz itz on ma hompage. if ur not den u rok. if u r den FOOOOOK UFFFFFFFFFF! pz willo isn't rely a prep. Raven plz do dis il promis 2 giv u bak ur postr!

{Trans: I said stop flaming the story! If you're a prep then don't read it! You can tell whether you're a prep or not by my quiz. It's on my homepage. If you're not then you rock! If you are then F*** OFF! PS: Willow isn't really a prep. Raven please do this. I promise to give you back your poser!}

{LAAN: Hey should I do the quiz? If yes then I'll put it in the next chapter I finish for the day.

*Edit*: I took the quiz. I'm Goffik. Here's what it says I am: U are for real Goffik!!! U heart Emo Boys, and cut yourself. You also love MCR, and GC. And I saw you talking to Draco! Do you like him? 

Hey I knew I like black and that style but I don't take it THAT far. And I only like two songs by My Chemical Romance. I prefer Evanescence actually. Notice that this author only mentions Amy Lee from Evanescence but not that she likes the band itself. She needs to get her facts straight.}

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Tom Riddle gave us some clothes and stuff for free. He said he would help us with makeup if he wanted because he was really into fashion and stuff. Hagird kept shouting at us to come back to Hogwarts. "What the f*** Hagrid?" I shouted angrily. "F*** off you f***ing bastard." Well anyway Willow came. Hagird went away angrily.

"Hey b*tch you look kawaii." she said.

"Yeah but not as kawaii as you." I answered sadly because Willow's really pretty and everything. She was wearing a short black corset-thing with blood red lace on it and a black blood-red miniskirt, leather fish-nets and black pointy boots that showed off how pale she was. She had a really nice body with big boobs. She was thin enough to be anorexic.

"So are you going to the concert with Draco?" she asked.

"Yeah." I said happily.

"I'm going with Diablo." she answered happily.

Well anyway Draco and Diablo came. They were both looking extremely hot and sexy and you could tell they thought we were too. Diablo was wearing a black t-shirt that said '666' on it. He was wearing tons off makeup just like Marilyn Manson. Draco was wearing black leather pants, a gothic black Good Charlotte t-shirt and black Vans he got from the Warped Tower {No clue what she's referring to}. Bloody Mary was going to the concert with Dracula.

Dracula used to be called Neville but it turned out that he was kidnapped at birth and his real family were vampires. They died in a car crash {You said vampires could only be killed with a stake or a cross. She's not accurate and uncreative with deaths...}. Neville converted to Satanism and he went goth. He was in Slytherin now. He was wearing a black ripped t-shirt, black jeans and shoes, and black hair with red streaks in it. We call him Dracula now {HOW FREAKING CREATIVE IS SHE?!}.

Well anyway we all went to Draco's black Mercy-Bens (geddit cuz wer gpffik) {Trans: Get it? Because we're gothic (Yes we get it)} that his dad Lucius gave him. We did pot, coke and crack {Coke and crack are the same thing}. Draco and I made out. We made fun of those stupid f***ing preps. We soon got there. I gasped.

Gerard was the sexiest guy ever! He looked even sexier than he did in pictures. He had long raven black hair and piercing blue eyes. He was really skinny and he had an amazing ethnic voice. We moshed to 'Helena' and some other songs. Suddenly Gerard pulled of his mask. So did the other members. I gasped. It wasn't Gerard at all! It was an ugly, preppy man with no nose and red eyes. Everyone ran away but me and Draco. It was Voldemort and the Death Eaters!

"You moronic idiots!" he shouted angrily. "Ebony, I told you to kill Vampire. Thou have failed. And now I shall kill thou and Draco!"

"No! No please!" We begged sadly but he took out his knife.

Suddenly a gothic old man flew in on his broomstick. He had long black hair and a long black beard. He was wearing a black robe that said 'Avril Lavigne' on the back. He shot a spell and Voldemort ran away. It was Dumbledore!