The end result (actual book)

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So, here's the result of hay I handed in:
The full updated version. 

Okay guys, I am very happy this book is finally finished and I am working on editing the whole thing, when I finished I'll change it here on wattpad as well, but I need people to give me a honest opinion about the book

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Okay guys, I am very happy this book is finally finished and I am working on editing the whole thing, when I finished I'll change it here on wattpad as well, but I need people to give me a honest opinion about the book.

So, I don't care if it's negative or positive. Just give me your opinion and why you think it's a horrible book or why it's a good book. You don't hurt my feelings or get me mad. I just need to know what you guys think of the story. I am working on a final report I have to hand in along with this book and I would really appreciate it if you tell me what you think.
Also, tell me what I need to do better next time I am write a story like this. Just be really critical! 😁

It's also for me to know how to improve my writing skills and what you guys think is annoying in a story or if I need to write in third person etc.

1. You liked the book because...?

2.  You didn't like the book because....?

Thanks ✌🏻

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