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- Reviewer Nana -
Book Cover:: 8/10The cover is good enough and relevant to the story, but the font at the top could be darkened or changed a bit. I liked the overall design but I would suggest adding wolves at the top to make it seem more interesting and mysterious.
Title:: 9/10 Although I like the name and it perfectly fits the plot, I would suggest adding the word werewolf, or something more to it.
Description:: 13/15 Overall the description is very intimidating, and the chosen part is great and does not need to be changed, however, I would suggest adding the warnings at the last line or create a separate chapter for them. Also, there were some grammar mistakes throughout that could be corrected.
Storyline & Plot:: 20/20 The storyline and plot are perfectly planned, I loved them. I don't think they need any changes since they're very interesting and thrilling.
Characters:: 9/10 I loved how the characters were set up and described, but I feel like more about the side characters and their life could have helped me understand and relate to them better. I would suggest giving some glimpses of their normal life and describing their features properly.
Dialogue Delivery:: 14/15 The dialogues were good and informative, however, the tags were missing at times and might confuse some people, so I would suggest you add proper dialogue tags.
Grammar & Vocab:: 18/20 There weren't many mistakes. -Punctuation:: You don't have to use period(.) so much, I saw an excessive use of it. You can just add a comma or use "and" instead. - Words:: Sometimes words were missing which can change the whole meaning of a sentence, for example, in the description you wrote "Jungkook looked over Taehyung's body", this should have been "Jungkook looked over at Taehyung's body", otherwise it would sound like he looked over/ above him.
Strengths::The unique imagination/perspective.
Weakness:: Honestly, you did so well that even the grammar mistakes and lack of character description didn't seem like much of a weakness, that being said it will still be counted since you need to improve here.
Tip:: Try reading books with more advanced grammar and description so you can write flawlessly. Also, I would suggest you write your daily life incidents in a journal for the betterment of concise thinking, although it's not needed since the plot was truly a piece of art.
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