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- Reviewer Max -
“Books are the quietest and most constant of friends; they are the most accessible and wisest of counsellors, and the most patient of teachers.” — Charles William Elliot.
Cover: 8/10 → The cartoon style is appealing. The colour palette is pleasing to the eye and creates a positive first impression.
Title 4/5 → If the title had been "when two worlds collided," it would have sounded overused. It sounds nice to say, and it gives me the impression of romance.
Blurb: 9/10 → It's rather impressive. The blurb might need some better grammar and language, but it's still an excellent read. It does a wonderful job of introducing the two primary characters.
Plot And Twists: 22/25 → The premise reminds me of a romance drama. The plot isn't really original, but it piqued my interest enough to make me want to read the book. These are the types of books that I can't get enough of.
Characters and Emotions: 6/10 → The female protagonist reminds me of kids in school, who aspire to be flawless in all they do, particularly studying. But I can see why she'd want it. Although the verbally abusive parent thing is a reality, it is becoming overused, and I would prefer to read books in which we have parents who aren't either decreased or abusive, but in this book, it would invalidate the plot's entire hurdle. I hate how she stirs up an argument with him instead of trying to help a clearly ill man who is barely conscious and has a wound. Shouldn't she have guessed that if he's unwell, he'll be babbling nonsense? The male protagonist is, to put it politely, uninteresting. I'm at a loss for words when it comes to what to say to him. He's a poor character who bears little resemblance to a royal. I understand that would have been confusing because this isn't his world, but I just can't sympathise with him.
Writing Style: 13/15 → The writing style is well-done, and I enjoy it. It has neither too complicated words nor too chill words, if you get what I mean. This kind of writing style reminds me of normal paperback books.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 9/10 → The vocabulary is exactly what you'd anticipate from a wattpad book: not too heavy, not too clumsy. The grammar is good, whoever edited this has clearly done a good job.
Reviewer’s thoughts: 3/5 → As a reader, I believe this is a book that I would cast aside after three chapters. While the majority of it is enjoyable, I am unable to read it because of the characters. Since, for me, literature is primarily about characters.
TOTAL: 74/100
Strengths and Weaknesses: → You need to touch up on the characters since it’s what most readers will focus on.
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