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- Reviewer Nyx -
𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 6/10
I don't know if you were trying to make the cover a dark aesthetic, but this cover is too dark. The quality is also poor. This makes it difficult for readers to see what it's actually intended to be. The title placement was bright and bold, so that seemed alright.
𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 3/5
Relevance to the plot was alright, but the title was too simplistic. "The girl who hated love". Had you tried for a fancier cover, this title would have created a problem for graphic designers due to its length. Try to shorten it and make it more appealing.
𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 2/10
What blurb am I supposed to review?
A single line?
That line does not count as a blurb. The only reason you got those 2 marks is that that line was slightly relevant to the plot of the story.
Make the blurb substantial. If I had been a normal reader I would not have picked this book to read it.
𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 15/25
Two best friends. The girl fell in love. The guy rejected her. She hated him.
Boom! Story's over.
Nothing special, it's clique. Tons of writers have written this. So, why should I read this particular story?
When I began reading, I thought this book would make me cry. In the end, it only made me frown. The plot got more and more confusing when you started entering the journal entries. The chapter that had poems confused me so much, I basically lost track of the plot momentarily.
I really hope you add something good before Sidharth and Amara get together. And if they don't get together, that's fine too.
𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 8/10
This was good. Amara's emotions were conveyed very well. I could feel her sadness and love. But when you said she hated Sid, I could not empathize on that. Everything else except her hatred seemed fine to me.
𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 12/15
Your words were simplistic, but that's alright. This story does not need fancy words. Everything that you had used suited the pace, flow, and plot of the story. You had this soft and sweet flow going throughout the story, which kept me hooked.
𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 1/20
The beginning was almost fine. You hadn't made too many mistakes, and the few mistakes seemed like minute typos to me. However, by the end, you started slacking. Small letters, too many grammatical and spelling errors. I am guessing you will be proofreading your book once more as you have mentioned in the beginning that it's not edited.
𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 3/5
I would not have added this book to my reading list, had I not been your reviewer. The cover and title did not attract me at all, but your writing style was good. I was honestly very sad when the book stopped abruptly as you had not updated it.
𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 62/100
𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 ::
Strengths -
- Ability to convey emotions through characters
- Grammar and vocabulary
Weaknesses -
- Common plot
- Lethargic Behaviour
- Not as creative with graphics and titles
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