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- Reviewer Nyx -
𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 3/10 The cover was good. Neither was it overstuffed with elements nor was it indecipherable. The fonts you used were plain, but they went well with the book.
𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 3/5 The title was related to the plot, but somehow, it did not compel me to read the book. Maybe you should try going for something even more unique.
𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 7/10 Your blurb was kind of messed up. Many of the consecutive lines had absolutely no relation with each other, yet they were being used. The grammatical errors in the blurb also made it seem unappealing.
𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 20/25 The plot was not unique, and that in turn, left nothing special in your book. The twists were kind of missing, and even if they were there, there was nothing special about them. In order for a book to be classified as good, there should be something that attracts the reader, an element to hook them, which was absent from your book.
𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 7/10 You failed to convey the emotions well. I did not feel Taehyung's pain when the love of his life died. I could not feel his hope when he found Yuri's lookalike. Try to add them. Otherwise, the blandness of your book will make it unappealing.
𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 10/15 Your writing style was neither good, nor bad. I liked the poem in the beginning, but that was it. You tend to mix a lot of things up, hoping to get something distinctive, but you just end up confusing the reader.
𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 15/20 The punctuation was missing in a lot of places. Your tenses need fixing as well. Bad grammar makes a book unappealing, so I recommend you to get your book professionally edited, and then learn grammar.
𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 3/5 I liked the overall theme of your book, even if it was cliché. You have no shortage of talent, you just need to know where to manifest it.
𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 68/100
𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 :: If that poem was written by you, then it was very impressive. I liked the flow. The way you had named your chapters was unique as well. If you just work on the minute mistakes I had mentioned above, you can be really good.
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