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- Reviewer May -
𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 1.5/10 It's not related to the plot and is too blurry. I would suggest using a faceless woman in this cover since it's mostly from the reader's point of view. Make the color scheme navy blue like the starry sky (?); something sentimental would look nice. You need a whole new cover because this one is just not it.
𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 4/5 It's partially beautiful. It's common, but it still has its own uniqueness to it. It's attractive and goes well with the plot.
𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 7/10 I would suggest giving a small synopsis of the book as well, and I feel like the structure of the sentence in the blurb can be more improvised.
𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 19/25 It's kinda a common concept and idea, but your writing style makes it unique. And the book is short; I feel like it deserves more chapters with more details as well. The twists were okay, and fit the plot, even though it's ordinary so you may have to plan better twists.
𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 7/10
If you have a more diverse vocabulary then you can portray your emotions better. It's good for now but has the potential to be better, in my opinion. The characters are good, and they fit the plot. I do see slight developments in them, but not much.
𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 12/15 I love your writing style, it's captivating. But in some places, your sentence structures weren't that good, like the second to last paragraph in the prologue chapter. You just added unnecessary words to your sentences when it can be kept brief. For example, a few sentences from the paragraph I mentioned above,
"...that I could have someone better, who didn't treat me as a toy and would kiss my tears away, someone who wouldn't walk through those doors, drunk every night."
Other than that, you are good. Do keep your tenses in check.
𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 16.5/20
You miss out on commas; you don't put them in the correct places. For example, it's the edited version from the first paragraph of the prologue chapter,
"When your saccharine lips kiss mine I forget the string of fate does not connect the two of us as lovers, it's just something that was never meant to be..."
You forgot a comma after "mine", I have seen more like this but I can't point out every single one of them, get it edited in an editing shop if you feel like your grammar isn't good.
Your vocabulary is average, it can be richer from reading New York seller books. I highly recommend them if you want to enhance your vocabulary.
𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 3/5
𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 70/100
𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 :: It's a good book. I liked the title, the blurb, and the prologue chapter as well. Your writing style too. These were captivating, but you have to work on your sentence structures, punctuations, and the cover as well.
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