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𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 9/10
The fonts are elegant, and the arrangement of the title and subtitle isn't off-putting. The image effectively conveys the book's royal concept, and the gloomy tones of the cover match the story's tone.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 4/5
The title is unique; I'm not aware of any other book with the same name. It's appropriate for the narrative, and I wouldn't change it. However, I recommend that the author include the title's meaning in the blurb for the convenience of readers who are unfamiliar with the language.

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 9/10
The synopsis is quite impressive. It reveals a lot about the plot while simultaneously maintaining elements of mystery that draw the reader in. The blurb's formatting and execution are very appealing. Overall, the author has done an excellent job.

𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 20/25
The author has done an excellent job of portraying the concept and explaining it in a way that makes sense. Though some of the author's notions are repulsive to me, I acknowledge the relevance of their inclusion due to the historical frame chosen. The idea of the co-wife being selfish and all that seems a little cliche at first, but what lends a twist to the trope is that I don't believe the female protagonist is interested in catfights. The narrative moves at a relatively slow rate, but the author builds up a lot of suspense for the protagonists' meeting. However, despite the slow pace, I was never bored. Except for the female lead not knowing the male lead's true identity, there aren't any major narrative twists yet.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 8/10
I expected to dislike the male protagonist by the end of this story, but I was pleasantly delighted to find that this was not the case. In the next chapters, I was able to see things from his perspective and sympathise with him. I guess what made me appreciate him so much was his realisation that his behaviour was inappropriate at first. I'm interested to see how he'll try to'make it up' or anything like. In terms of the female lead, I've always enjoyed her. She is a strong-willed woman with ethics. She isn't obnoxious or disrespectful, but she also doesn't let someone walk all over her. Her desire to live alone, continue her studies, and establish a name for herself gave her attitude and character additional depth. Now, as for the co-wife, I believe she will be the story's antagonist, and her character fits that description. Even the minor characters have been given a realistic personality by the author, which adds to the story's intrigue. All of the characters seem to belong in this scenario and don't seem out of place.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 13.75/15
The explanations are just precise enough for me to visualise the events. The plot was spiced up even more by the author's writing style. The language structure and chapter arrangement were both excellent. The author didn't use a lot of big words, just enough to keep the text from being boring. The author's writing style is simple to comprehend and makes complete sense.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 14/20
I noticed a few minor grammatical errors. In the fourth chapter, the author has mixed up the words 'meddle' and 'mendel.' The use of phrases from the Indian language gives the text a more authentic feel, but scrolling down for the definitions became tedious. Despite this, the vocabulary is appropriate for the genre.

𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 3/5
I don't normally read books like this, but the premise drew me in. The characters and details piqued my interest, and I believe that the book is well worth reading.

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 80.75/100

𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 ::
I think the author should use fewer phrases from the other language. This isn't necessarily a flaw, but it is something that I believe can be irritating to people unfamiliar with the language. I wouldn't recommend to quit using it entirely because it does add to the theme; rather, reduce its use slightly. In terms of the author's descriptions, I'd say they're the most stunning. The details are precise and made reading the narrative much more enjoyable.

 The details are precise and made reading the narrative much more enjoyable

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