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-Reviewer Katha-
BOOK COVER[9/10]:
The book cover is really pretty and eye-catching. The fonts are well used and visible. The background picture is also nicely edited.
TITLE[9/10]:
The title is nice and it matches the story line. It is also attractive.
DESCRIPTION[14/15]:
The description is really well-written and I haven't spotted any grammar mistakes, which is good. It does not reveal much about the story, which is an important aspect of writing the description, and it makes the readers curious, aka me.
STORY LINE[19/20]:
The story line is really well conveyed and it has a steady flow. The story is not too exaggerated like many and is practical in many other ways. Also, I appreciate how you have added (not many) the few terminologies and descriptions about managing a company, because some writers do it really vaguely.
CHARACTERS[9/10]:
You have described the characters really well and their interactions are also really nicely written.
DIALOGUE DELIVERY [14/15]:
I liked how you distinguished the dialogues from the rest by writing them in italics. The dialogues are well-constructed and are able to convey the right emotions correctly and everything.
GRAMMAR & VOCAB[17/20]:
I haven't seen major grammatical mistakes. However, there are a few very minor ones, which I assume are typo errors and can be mended if edited again.
Your vocabulary is pretty good but your description ability needs some improvement.
TOTAL: 91/100
STRENGTH AND WEAKNESS:Your way of conveying the plot is really great and your grammar is also pretty good. Your creative imagination is, of course, a plus point for you.
I didn't find any major weaknesses in your book. Just a few typo errors here and there, which can be mended if you go through the story one more time and correct them.
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