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- Reviewer Moni -

𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 4/10
It isn't particularly appealing, and the text is nearly invisible. I'd suggest using a stronger, darker text with some shadow, as well as a photo or images that are more in tune with the tale.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 2.5/5
To be brutally honest, it's nothing to be impressed with; after all, it's the name of a song that already exists. It does, however, fit in well with the narrative, and I won't deny that. But, as I already stated, it isn't really captivating.

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 8/10
The blurb is typical. It contains the necessary information and does not reveal too much about the plot - it is satisfactory.

𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 20/25
It was undoubtedly a one-of-a-kind story that I hadn't read in a long time. It was refreshing to read something new and different. Even though it was strange to read a fanfic featuring non-BTS members, it wasn't unpleasant at all; in fact, it was quite enjoyable.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 8/10
Everything in the book has been written to a high standard. But one thing I'd like to point out is that the emotions were sometimes practically robotic. Isn't it true that the writing at times feels unreal? In other words, the emotions didn't stick to me very well. (It's probably a me issue), but if you want to improve, I'd suggest taking the easy way out with words every now and again. Change it up a little by being plain and not too artsy. Simple words can have a wide range of meanings.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 13/15
As I already stated, the writing style is quite appealing. And I'm rather astonished by it.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 18/20
Again, there are no issues with vocabulary or grammar. It appeared to be just wonderful the way it was.

𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 4/5
It's a fantastic story with very few flaws. So, keep going. Best wishes.

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 77.5/100

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