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Book cover :: 10/10
I love everything ng about it to be honest, the color scheme, the elements used, basically how it's entirely made.
The cover matched the plot so well, gives me such a homey vibe, and its damn attractive.
The fonts, the colors ahh, it's perfect.
Title :: 10/10
The title is very unique, and it looks sophisticated, so that's huge plus points. It's truly worth remembering.
Searched the meaning as well, it really fits.
Description :: 12/15
Although I like it, don't get me wrong, but I feel like it needs more of the "I need to see this happen" element.
Maybe take one of their conversations from the book (the kind that would catch the reader's attention) you don't have to remove the existing one though.
Story line :: 13/20
The story line is cute, it gives such a warm feeling while reading it. I gotta say the story line is overused, don't get me wrong though, I like it and of course its a little different from the other bestfriend x bestfriend fanfictions, but the whole overused concept is still there. I suggest making it different by the next scenes, especially the ending.
Characters :: 8/10
The characters, I love them, but the development was a little fast, like they were quick to change. Maybe have a short flashbacks so that the readers understand why they fell in love, and maybe voice-out the character's feelings more. I love Hoseok and his sister's character so much uwu.
Dialogue delivery :: 15/15
The dialogues was expressed so well, that's a huge thumbs up on your side, the emotion that was demanded to be felt, was felt.
Grammar & Vocab :: 19/20
The grammar and the vocab is good, but like other authors (including myself) it has a few minor errors, and some unnecessary words could be removed.
Total :: 87/100
Weaknesses and strengths ::
One of your strengths is your uniqueness when it comes to writing, your style is admirable and it looks good, pleasing to the eyes of the reader as well.
The grammar is on point along with your vocab, but as I said, unnecessary words were detected, if it could be edited out (perhaps have an editor take a look)
it would be good, just that and you're good to go. Your cover is really pretty as well! I just love everything about it.
The title fits the whole story line, plus its unique, makes you outstanding.
Just maybe look at the given details above on your description, story line, and characters for your minor weaknesses.
Thank you for giving THC a chance to review your wonderful book!
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