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𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 6/10

The cover matches the depressed vibe of separation and being lost.

The fonts are the main problem, though, and the title and author's name are not visible at all.

A font that is subtle and doesn't dominate the background, and at the same time is also readable and clearly visible would be a better choice.


𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 2/5

"Waiting for you" only conveys the expectation and yearning for someone to come back. But, it doesn't talk about or show the pain and anxiety that the female protagonist had to go through while waiting for her boyfriend to come back safe and alive from the war. It also doesn't convey the heaviness of the subject you have written about.

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