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-Reviewer Nana-
Mistakes found till 7th chapter::
Caps- POWER NAP
Extension of voice- JUNGSOYAAAA
Punctuation- Wake up!!! ---- no punctuation after jungsoyaaaa yet the narration started with a lowercase letter. Comma used in the narration and dialogues started in capital letters. Random capitalization. Ellipsis
Korean words are used without explaining the meanings of the word beforehand.
Tense- according to the tense being used it should be wait! why did she come so early? while it was wait! why did she came so early.
Punctuation was missing too. More tense mistakes like narrating in past tense and then adding present perfect or simple present words.
Cremation is used unnecessarily when it means the disposal of a dead person's body by burning it to ashes, typically after a funeral ceremony, the meaning was misunderstood or the word was not used properly. crematorium is misunderstood or wrongly used, it's a place where a dead person's body is cremated. spayed is to remove the ovaries and uterus of a female animal, this word again is either misunderstood or not used correctly.
