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-Reviewer Minsha-
Book Cover - 6/10
Since it's a BTS one-shot book, the photo used is good, but I would suggest using some other photo with a larger or more visible backdrop so you can do the title and things. It doesn't fit the name "Nyctophile". Use some dark pictures or at least keep the colour of the font as something dark, it'll be more suitable and eye-catchy since "Nyctophile" means "a person who loves the dark of night". So, you can also use some images which have a backdrop of the night like the one from Life Goes On.
Title - 5/10
The title doesn't suit the story. Because it's a One-Shot book it's okay. But, it makes you feel, well at least to me that it has dark stories, so maybe choose some other word. I don't like it much. But the part "BTS ONE-SHOTS" is good.
Description - 14/15
I think it's one of the best descriptions one could give for a one-shot book. But, the thing that you wanted to write the one-shots on the plots the reader wished, you should've mentioned that.
Storyline - 16/20
The plots are well written and represented. Though, at places, I did feel like, "Uhh...it doesn't make sense" or "I don't wanna read anymore", so the plots aren't intriguing, but they are written nicely. Those parts need to be worked on.
Characters - 7/10
The characters are nicely illustrated. I mean it's good. The characters are well demonstrated. Although emotions do lack and scenes need more elaboration, the characters are really good.
Dialogue delivery - 11/15
They were good and made sense. The thing that every time someone speaks you probably did make a different paragraph, that's good. The dialogues are said pleasingly.
Grammar and vocabulary - 16/20
I did notice a few grammatical errors here and there. There are typos but the vocabulary is good. I didn't see any lines repeating. Just work a little on grammar.
Total::65/100
Strengths and weaknesses::Your writing style and your vocabulary is the best thing in your story, followed by dialogues. I love the way you portray dialogues. Your characters are good, though your typos and punctuation errors are your weaknesses. Nevertheless, keep up the hard work and keep trying!
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