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- Reviewer Bun -
Book cover- 0.3/10
All the elements used in the cover didn't go well with the theme of the story. I suggest you redo your cover.
Title- 4/10
The title is relevant for it was a prank call that was the root cause of the happenings. But, it isn't quite creative or unique. Since it's very common, your book might get lost in thousands of stories with the same name. I suggest changing it to something unusual yet attractive.
Description- 10/15
The description is interesting and makes readers want to know more, but I'm disappointed that a paragraph from inside the story was copied and pasted. I was expecting something more thrilling. Also there are several grammatical mistakes. The blurb should be devoid of mistakes, since that determines the first impressions of readers on authors. There was also confusion at the start of the blurb as dialogue tags were missing, making it difficult to identify who was speaking what till the mention of the other person's gender. My suggestion to improve this blurb would be to replace the dialogue with a small yet hooking description.
