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-Reviewer Katha-
BOOK COVER[2/10]:
The cover is too simple to be called pretty, and it doesn't seem like you used any font for the title on the cover. The picture is alright, but something with more edits could be used to make it look more attractive.
TITLE[9/10]:
The title is pretty unique and interesting.
DESCRIPTION[5/15]:
The description is short and it reveals an important part of the story. Also, there are several mistakes in punctuations, like: an ellipsis[...] which doesn't have two dots but three. I would suggest adding a little bit more to the synopsis, but at the same time not revealing much about the story to make the readers curious and want to know more.
STORY LINE[18/20]:
The story line is different and honestly, I've never read a story with the female lead being the one magical. So that's something unique! I also appreciate how you have started the story simple and added little flashbacks here and there. All I can say is that it's a nice plot.
CHARACTERS[6/10]:
You should provide descriptions for the characters, otherwise it would be really difficult for readers who don't know the character you're talking about. I would say that you have not exaggerated your characters, which is positive and being relatable to the readers is a plus point.
DIALOGUE DELIVERY[10/15]:
The dialogues were pretty good and fun to read, though there have been grammatical errors pretty often. The construction of the sentences were also wrong at some places. Like: "Ofcourse!" is not a single word but two separate words- 'of' and 'course'.
GRAMMAR AND VOCAB[11/20]:
Your grammar is not that bad, but it's not too good either. Your punctuations really need to improve. You have used ellipsis at the wrong places, where I felt they were not needed.
Your vocabulary also needs to be improvised.
TOTAL: 61/100
STRENGTH AND WEAKNESS: Your strength was your imagination because, most of the time, it's the male lead with powers and him being unable to control them. Still, this was something different.
Your weakness is grammar and vocabulary, along with punctuations. This is because, throughout the book, I've seen you using ellipsis at wrong places. Also you should improvise a bit on your sentence construction and description of the story - because a story can't just have dialogues and verbal/action tags.
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