The Dusk Rises

chapter 1

So this is my first book so tell me how you like it be honest I can take it.

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CHAPTER ONE

Hi I'm Jamie, I'm in high school. I have short brown almost black hair, I'm somewhat skinny, I have blue turning brown eyes. I get along with boys better then girls, but I don't have a boy friend. I am absessed with vampires, for now anyway.

I was in school one day, and I was walking down the hall and this guy bumped into me. I've never seen him before and I knew everyone in the school. I just thought he was a normal guy, so I just went on my way to class.

At lunch I saw him he had thick short brown hair, muscular body, and brown eyes. I went and sat by him to see if I could try being friends with him.

"So I saw you in the hall, are you new here?" I asked him. I waited for a while and got no response so I tried again, "So do you like it here?" No response. So I just sat there, it was somewhat awkward, so I left.

After school my, kind of chubby, dirty blonde, and blue eyed friend, Jason, and I went to the forest in front of the school.

"So you know that new kid in school?" I ask him.

"Ya, kind of, why?" He responded

"Well, there's something strange about him."

"How so?"

"I was trying to talk to him at lunch and he didn't respond."

"New kids usually don't talk! Plus you could have scared him."

" I DID NOT SCARE HIM! And it wasn't the kind of 'new kid scared to talk' look, it was more like a 'leave me alone,' but it wasn't in a mean way look."

"Whatever you say!"

When I was done there, I started heading home. I wasn't really paying attention and I almost got hit by a car. It went so fast I can't really remember what happened, all I know is that I didn't get hit and the car had a big hand shaped dent on it. I was very confused, I just started walking home again. I kept on thinking 'what was that that stopped the car?' or 'How did I survive that?'

When I finally got home I was more confused then before. I was thinking of telling my mom, but I wasn't quite sure what I saw was true, so I didn't. I just went and wrote in my journal about what I thought I saw.

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Sorry about about the short descriptions I hope you like it if not sorry just tell me if you don't like it. I'll try to fix it.