Bullshit and Rants

Preview

I had a story idea.
I want to write it.
However...
I want to make a short preview first to see if any of you like it. Then I'll decide if I should write it or not.
:-)

Anya arose in a white room. Everything was white. She was in a white dress, and barefoot, which had made her cold in this seemingly white room. There were others around her. They were all girls like her. In the same white dress, lying on the same white beds, all in a row, calmly asleep. They breathed lightly and did not seem to awake any time soon. Anya swung her legs over the side of the bed and placed them down on the cold white tile. Her legs were thin. And pale. She had always been pale, and had long dark, frizzy hair, but from what she saw on her shoulders, it was long and silky. All of these things were strange, thin was not in her vocabulary, from what she could remember in her appearance, she had used to be quite plump, and never was considered a "cute girl". Upon noticing this she glanced around the room for something reflective- possibly a mirror. And what luck! She found a long mirror in the corner of the room.
She walked briskly through the room, passed the sleeping girls, and toward the mirror, her feet making a "pitter-patter" sound as she walked.
The room was kept cool, and her arms had goosebumps.
She closed her eyes when approaching the mirror, so she could surprise herself. Since her eyes were closed, she hit her head on the mirror, was taken aback by the blow, and shocked by her own reflection. She was no longer plump, but thin and lanky, her hair was smooth, her eyes sparkled, and her pale skin was milky without flaw.
She didn't look like herself- but she was herself. Just without the freckles and extra weight. She gasped at this discovery and took a few steps back, when she hit something. Long pods lined the walls, and had white steel doors shutting them. Anya had always been a curious girl, and took a look at the strange object. There was a handprint recognition pad on the side of the pod, and Anya placed her hand on it. A loud ding played, and a robotic voice played out,
"Miss Anya Yui... Related. Access granted."
The white steel doors had opened to another set of glass doors, locked with a number keypad. Behind the glass doors sat a girl. She wore a beautiful navy blue dress, had tan skin, and dark brown hair. She had vibrant green eyes, with a sullen look to them, even if she was smiling. She sat on a wooden chair, simply staring out at nothing, she didn't even notice Anya. She had a number tattooed on her neck: 0102.
Anya typed it in to the keypad, and opened up the glass doors.
The girl did not move. Anya waved her hands in front of the girl's face... but she didn't even flinch. Anya went around behind the girl and saw something awful.... that was most likely the loudest Anya had ever screamed in her life.

~STUFFED~
By: Lemonkirby40