Some Things That Happened Off-Page

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Hey. It's been a while. I just want to share some things that happened off-screen that I can't write in without it being too poorly written.

Tree's Death:

So, last time he was slowly going away, and I kind of wanted to add a moment with him and Bottle, but realized that before he could fade away entirely, his mouth would be gone. So, I don't really know how to execute that. I WILL focus on the sort of depression that happens after he dies.

Donut and Barf Bag Getting Together:

Trust me guys, I TRIED to write this in somehow, but it just got cringier as I kept trying. So, let's just say they did get together, hooray! For real though, they were supposed to get together in Chapter 41, but I couldn't write it out well.

David & Coiny finding Eraser

So, Eraser was wondering near Iance territory and found the other two leaving their base. He decided to team up with them instead of attacking, which by the way, he can easily do. They agree, although David is a bit hesitant.

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So, I've updated. It's been a month. Yes, I'm going to start updating this again, and I'm excited to see how this will turn out. 

Hope you have a good day and thank you for reading!

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