I see Dad hurry through the door. "Erudite" mums eyes widen "it is happening again" mum mutters. A man about the same age as mum walks slowly through the doors, he is dressed in all blue. "Celeb. Shit Toby take Maddi out, he doesn't know Noah so he should be fine. Noah take this gun and keep this knife. Toby you two have weapons." Dad shakes his head "Tris what are you doing?" I hear dad whisper "I love you all." Mum quietly walks out so no one hears her I see her walk around the ward so this Celeb person can't see her. I see Chris burst through the double doors to the ward. "How can I help you Erudite?" she Clearly asks him. "I am looking for someone, don't call me Erudite like it is an offence because I am obviously better turned out than you as you look a bit like a whore. I watch mum though the glass and she is becoming angry.
I see Chris punch him in the gut and he kicks at her rib she doesn't wince at all Celeb looks so weak. "I will ask you again then you Erudite scum. What are you doing here?" He laughs "I told you, I am looking for someone." Chris kicks him in the chest. "WHO?!?" She screams at him and pulls his arms behind his back. "Natalie" he screeches. Mum burst out of the other doors. "Is that so Celeb" she crosses her arms over her chest protectively. "T-t-tris what happened to you?" mum rolls her eyes and I see what Celeb meant Mum has a bruise on her eye and bruised knuckles. Dads eyes widen. "So what do you really want?" Celeb laughs "Tris stop being so stubborn, where is my daughter?" Mum glares. Chris punches him again. "The traitor you mean?" Celeb smiles.
"who is he?" I ask dad. "her brother your uncle."
He stands "so where is she?" Mum laughs "Where do you think clever clogs?" He glares at mum then laughs "don't forget you had an aptitude for Erudite as much as I did so don't try to compare" Mum opens her mouth. "how did you know that. If you are so clever what are the factions I have an aptitude for Celeb?" Celeb laughs "Abnegation, Erudite and dauntless" Chris' eyes widen and she stares at Mum. I smile. "how do you know that? Tell me now Celeb or I will go and I swear to God finish your so called daughter!" She then Kicks his shin. "NOW CELEB!" he laughs. "Fine if you must know we studied you and watched your fear simulations" He laughs. "you son of a bitch Celeb" Mum grabs him by the collar and pulls him down the stairs. Me and dad run after them quietly. Chris walks alongside mum laughing. She holds Celeb as mum goes off into this ward I don't recognize. She pulls out a battered Bruised Natalie. "TRIS DON'T YOU DARE!" Celeb screams and tries to break out of the hold but can't. Christina is stronger than she looks. Dad grabs my arm sensing my first move after what she did. I look at him in the eyes and he releases his grip on my arm. "Fine" He mumbles. "Tris please" Celeb begs. HA. Mum punches him again and I run in. "Natalie you Bitch seems like we have an audience now, I can finally get you back for what you did to Noah. I must say though loving your new grunge look." Dad laughs and stands behind Celeb. "Who the FUCK is this Natalie" she smiles "you told me to mess up Tris' live I choose to do this via her idiotic daughter." He laughs. "I am sorry, Idiotic. Nah not for me." Celeb looks confused "oh you must be Maddi" I laugh "And GUESS WHAT CELEB AND NATALIE!?! Unless stupid people can get an aptitude for Erudite then I guess your point is inaccurate as you two may also be idiots then!" I say in my best Erudite sounding voice. Mum, Dad and Chris laugh with me. "Anyway where were we Natalie" I she her smile. What has she done now. Dad taps be I instantly duck as I hear a click of a gun. I see Natalie has hit the wall. "real clever Natalie." sarcasm shows my dauntless side "That was so inaccurate" I laugh. In my best Erudite voice once more. I Kick the gun out of Natalie's Hand. Dad grabs it before she can even try. I punch her in the head and she kicks my shin. I yawn and pretend she is having no effect. Dad smiles as it was him who taught me how to conceal my feelings.
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I might update tomorrow hopefully. Comment thoughts and improvements, sorry I haven't edited it yet.
