Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372
Title: The Shadow Behind
Author: AfremovC
Genre. Action/Adventure
Title/Cover/Description:
The title is interesting, and I think it fits with the story. The cover is nice and a tad mysterious, so it fits with the story. The description is very detailed, with a couple little Grammer mistakes.
3.7/5
Beginning/Details:
The beginning of this story was good, if not a little confusing. I couldn't tell what was happening at times, and there should be a bit more detail.
3.2/5
Character Development:
Monica and Adamantus are developing well. I think Adamantus acts a little strange at first, but it goes with the story.
3.4/5
Plot: The plot is good, well paced, and developing nicely.
3.7/5
Grammar/Spelling:
There are a couple cases of missing commas and other punctuation. Otherwise, it's correct.
3.8/5
Overall: 3.5/5
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