Title: our baby girl's birthday
Genre: short story
Author: HeartlessHeart234
Judge: CathrineRajkumar
Cover/title: the cover is good but you only added the story name not the author name. You should add it. Coming to title it's somewhat different from others.
I would love to give 1.5/2
Description: the description of your story is quite enough to know the concept of your story.
I would love to give 0.9/1
Story line: the concept is good and different from other swasan story. There are some grammatical errors so just edit that. Apart from that everything is good.
I would love to give 1.5/2
Total score: 3.9/5
All the best for your future dear......
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