Book name : midnight lover
Genre : romance
Contestant name : Reign_lulubel07
Judge name : 145bookreader
Cover : The cover should be interesting, it is what makes the reader click on the story. Work on that. Also the quality of the picture should be good. (0.2/1)
Title : the title is nice and goes with the plot of the story. (0.8/1)
Description : the description is okay. U need to write something that gives an overview of the plot or u can also use a main scene from the story .work on it. (0.3/1)
About the story : There are many grammatical errors. Also u need to work on punctuation .proof reading your chapter might help. Make sure your words go with your plot. And it is believable.
Complete the dialogues and tell a bit about your character and the setting, also about the plot.
U are writing a story, not a excerpt ,act like it.
The plot is like the skeleton of the story, you have to fill it with words..
Also there are many grammatical errors, correct them, a reader will only ignore so much.
Wishing you the best of luck (0.3/2)
Total score : (1.6/5)
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