Book name: Cloaked in shadow
Written by: d0pp3lgang3r
Genre: Fanfiction
Judged by: @Jash_Parikh
Hey, let's start your review in a specific order...
Cover: Mysterious and stylish, specifically the font of the title. The font of the author's name needs some work as it is not easily distinguishable from the background. For this you get 0.9/1.
Title: It's nice except for the fact that it's grammatically incorrect. It should either be "Cloaked in A Shadow" or "Cloaked in Shadows". For this you get 0.9/1.
Description: The different paragraphs cum lines look good, but only upto a certain point. Scrolling after reading each line kinda defeats the purpose of being mysterious in short sentences. The language could have been on the higher side but the style of wrting is good. The format is splendid, though; great work! For this you get 0.95/1.
Beginning and Plot: Best part is this book is universe friendly, meaning not just for the fandom! I love that you have provided descriptions in the beginning itself for people who haven't read the book. Your grammar is spot on and so is your writing style. The way you describe the surroundings is perfect and how it should be in a good novel. It makes it whole lot easier for readers to visualize the events. The plot is something new, something exciting and paced pretty well. However, one thing you could change is the chapter names. If you wanna tell us whose POV you're writing, you can say so just at the beginning. Use centre allignment and Bolden it so that it is clear; and give creative relatable names to your chapters. All around this is a good book. For this you get 1.75/2.
Your total score is: 4.5/5.
THIS BOOK HAS BEEN JUDGED MODERATELY, NEITHER TOO HARSHLY & NOR TOO LENIENTLY. FOR ANY QUESTIONS OR QUERIES, FEEL FREE TO PM ME.
P.S. - Ignore any typos, if found ;)
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