Book name: Prisoner 113-1698
Written by: BlazingBengal
Genre: Fanfiction
Judged by: Jash_Parikh
Hey, let's start your review in a specific order...
Cover: Apt for a fanfiction to use its characters but this could have been more creative.The pink font is bad combination and the author's name is also missing which is a big no-no in covers. For this you get 0.35/1.
Title: Creative and relatable to your story, gives a sense of curiosity as well. Good job. For this you get 0.85/1.
Descrption: Significant differentiation between paragraphs is recomended seeing as everything looks too mushy and mixed up without proper significance. The description is a nice blend of vocabulary and is not very long, so a plus point. The grammar is on point and so is the writing style. However, content-wise, somethings could have been better; details seem to vague and farfetched to be understandable. Somewhat interested in reading the book but not much. But if the fandom of your fanfic is interested then you have nothing to worry about for outsiders. For this you get 0.85/1.
Beginning and Plot: The language and style of writing is good. The vocabulary could have been slightly on the higher side but this will do, too. The plot is very well thought of, all though it needs some detailing and description. Also, not sure if you know this, but the ice in Pluto is methane ice (methane hydrate) which starts burning as soon as burning flame is brought near it; all that's left in the end is water. So maybe if I'd take more than a bottle with me for research purposes, just to be safe. I personally lie very much that you are writing the backstory of a character not very well defined in the series. The chapter names could use some more creativity but otherwsie everything is nice. For this you get 1.25/2.
Your total score is: 3.3/5.
THIS BOOK HAS BEEN JUDGED MODERATELY, NEITHER TOO HARSHLY & NOR TOO LENIENTLY. FOR ANY QUESTIONS OR QUERIES, FEEL FREE TO PM ME.
P.S. - Ignore any typos, if found ;)
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