Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372
Title : Lost in Blue
Author.MarloPolo
Genre. Action/Adventure
Title/Cover/Description:
The title works with the story. It gives a little information about it, but not too much. The cover is really nicely made. The description doesn't give too much or too little information.
4.2/5
Beginning/Details:
The beginning is interesting, and is really detailed. Later in the story, there is less detail. I sometimes can't tell when it is a flashback or not. I also can't tell when it changed points of view.
3.2/5
Character Development:
I like how the personalities of the characters clash. They developed really good together.
3.9/5
Plot:
The plot flows nicely, with no big holes. The only problem I have, is that I hear the shipwreck on deserted island/amnesia thing a LOT! I mean, your story puts a new take on it, but I think it's an over used idea. You make it work a little better than all the others.
3/5
Grammer/Spelling:
I saw that you use a different countries punctuation system, but I don't really understand, since I'm American. I'm not going to criticize it, since it is how you learned.
4/5
Overall: 3.7/5
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