action/adventure: Isabella

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Judge: KatnissEverdeen1237

Title Isabella

Author: NerdyStuff101



Genre: Action/Adventure

Title/Cover/Description:

The title is the name of the main female character, so it fits. The cover doesn't really attract my attention, and I can't see your whole username. The description is interesting, and really describes the story.

3.4/5

Beginning/Details:

The beginning is interesting. How Isabella reacts when she meets Riley is fun to read.

3.7/5

Character Development:

The way Isabella's character develops is good, and fun to read. How Riley develops is good, too.

3.8/5

Plot:

I think there are a few holes in the plot, like them traveling places. There are more details in certain places than others.

3/5

Grammer/Spelling:

There are a few missing commas, and other punctuation.

3.2/5

Overall: 3.4/5

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