Horror/Paranormal: The Nefarious Nine

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Book: The Nefarious Nine
Genre: Horror/Paranormal
Writer: shellyxleonn
Reviewed by non_deficere

Cover/Description:
Your cover is really good, is different and it stands out. On your description, I would suggest for the info on the winnings of this book to be at the end of the description or at least give enough space between the two. About the description itself, you gave great hints about the plot, but it didn't have that paranormal vibe, to me it felt more like a science fiction description, I would suggest for you to add a little mystery to it.

The beginning:
The first chapter to me was just an introduction to the three main characters and their bond, which is a nice start so your readers can connect with the characters, I liked the way you pursued their connection as a group, but also as their own personality.

Detailing/Grammar:
Your grammar and detailing skills are impressive.

Character Development/Plot:
You were able to introduce every single character individually and extendedly even though you introduce them together.
The plot has a great potential, the chemistry between the three friends combined with all paranormal thing gives a lot of room for over intriguing and entertaining moments.

My view as a reader:
Your cover stands out from the crowd, your description could use some more mystery though.
The characters are easy to emphasize with, and your plot is really interesting, their power is out of this world but you made it look like it's a reality. I also love your presence in the book.

All the Best :)
-Claudushka

I would rate this book 4.5/5

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