The Mystical Awards 2.0 July Reviews

Vamp/Werewolf: Immortally Beloved 🥇

Book: Immortally Beloved
Genre; Vamp/Werewolf
Writer: JadedElegance
Reviewed by non_deficere

Cover/Description:
The book cover is really good, it fits perfectly on the vampire genre.
Your description screams girl power, and you introduced Eleni in a very elegant way, I was lacking of some more edge in the description but overall a good front cover to your book.

The beginning:
Your ability to describing ever single detail is impressive, your grammar skills are absolutely incredible, you made every scenario written in a very vivid detail, and the way you pursued Eleni was gorgeous.

Detailing/Grammar:
Everything was perfection. Nothing to improve.

Character Development/Plot:
You took tour time to introduce Eleni, you portrayed her beautifully well. As for the plot, it takes a while to develop, is very slow paced and sometimes that throws off a lot of readers, I know you are telling a story here and want every detail flawless, I can see the amount of work you put into this book, but the first chapters were really slow in terms of moving the story along.

My view as a reader:
Your book is perfectly written, you have a gift to write and describe every detail, your writing is flawless and complex, this book is an example of perfection for the way you write it.
Although it should work, for me it didn't, and I think is because this book isn't for everyone perhaps.
I was struggling to keep my full attention into your book, the chapters were overwhelming and really long, I was lacking of characters interaction and more of a simplistic storyline. You also kept going over different places and times throughout every chapter and that became distracting at times.
You have a great package from the outside with the most amazing skills inside but the plot needs to hook up readers and unfortunately that didn't really work for me. You created a masterpiece but I'm missing more personality and that makes me completely disconnected as a reader.

Overall you have an excellent book, written perfectly well, and I wish you all the best.
-claudushka

I would rate this book 4/5