The Mystical Awards 2.0 July Reviews

Romance Struck By Pyaar

Book name : struck by pyaar

Genre : Romance

Contestant name : thanashree

Judge name : 145bookreader

Cover : the cover of the story is nice, giving a romantic vibe.(0.8/1)

Title : the title is good telling that love happens anytime and anywhere. (0.8/1)

Description : although the description is alluring, you need to work on grammar and also give proper space between sentences, it makes the words more presentable. (0.7/1)

About the story : The concept is good but maybe u could give a character sketch so that the reader would now what to expect and also do clear who is the lead .people see themselves in these characters, deal with their emotions carefully.

Also there are many grammatical errors, proof reading might help.

Use proper spaces between sentences, it not only makes it look good but helps to differentiate between various scenes.

Use of good words is important but u can't just add them anywhere. Work on that part.

Wishing you the best of luck (0.8/2)

Total score : (3.1/5)