General Fiction 30 Days Ultimatum🏅

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Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372

Title . 30 Days Ultimatum

Author. strawberrytrifles

Genre. General Fiction

Title/Cover/Description:

The title fits really well with the book. The cover is absolutely amazing! Good job to whoever made it. It really goes with the book. The description is very detailed, without giving away too much.

4.6/5

Beginning/Details:

I loved the beginning of this story, it was interesting, and it gave little hints of what was going to happen, but it didn't actually say it for a few minutes. This story was very detailed, good job!

4.5/5

Character Development:

I really like the evolvment of the characters. Mia goes from liking Dayne and hating Jason, to hating Dayne and loving Jason. It was very interesting.

4.6/5

Plot: I loved this idea. This is a completely original idea, I mean, of the books I've read. There were no big holes in the plot, and it flowed nicely.

4.7/5

Grammer/Spelling:

I only noticed a couple of places that we're missing commas or other punctuation.

4.5/5

Overall: 4.6/5

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