Short Story : Tum Kismat Se Meri Dua Band Ho

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Book Name: Tum kismat se meri dua bane ho
Genre: Short Story
Author Name: praju2797
Judge: SaachiDudani

Cover: It's good but the colours used are too bright. All the colours. Like I wanted to see the award stamp but couldn't read what's actually written. A mistake of the Awards too. It's however an okay-okay kinda. Score: 0.4/1

Title: Dramatic. But nice. Preferably should have been a bit small. But cannot judge it before reading the story. Score: 0.5/1

Description: What you mentioned in the description is what is actually to be mentioned in the 'introduction' part. Description is about the emotions of the story more than the Precap. If the story is about love, you could have added some love quotes or something. Score: 0.5/1

Beginning: (To the reader)If you have completed your novel and are currently not busy, then please edit your novel. It has grammatical errors, spacing errors and with too many dots............. *There is one request to all those who tag their books for awards, please read your own novel once to make sure that you don't have any mistakes and your novel is satisfying all the conditions for judging.* Score: 1/2

Total: 2.4/5




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