The Mystical Awards 2.0 July Reviews

Humour : Inferal Regions 🏅

Judge :KatnissEverdeen12372

Title . Infernal Regions

Author :mahitha-

Title . Humor

Title/Cover/Description:

The title is interesting, even if it doesn't describe the story too much. The cover is very well made, but it also doesn't really fit with the story too well. The description needs a little more detail than just a couple sentences.

2.5/5

Beginning/Details:

I like how the story starts, it's interesting. It gives one of the conflicts, and introduces a couple of the characters. The story is mildly detailed, but it could use a but more information.

3.7/5

Character Development:

Throughout the story, you learn a lot about Mira, and her past. You learn a lot about the other characters as well, but Mira the most. You learn about her family, job, friends, and other important details.

3.4/5

Plot:

I love the plot of this story. It is really interesting and I enjoy it. There are a few parts where the story doesn't flow very well. There are also a few holes in the plot.

3.8/5

Grammer/Spelling:

I only noticed a few Grammer mistakes. In some places, the sentences didn't seem to be worded correctly, and some places were missing commas.

3.5/5

Overall: 3.4/5