Romance Started With A Text

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Book name : started with a text

Genre : romance

Contestant name : Impossible_Girl_5

Judge name : 145bookreader

Cover : the cover of the story is beautiful and defines the word love story very well.(0.9/1)

Title : the title is appropriate and goes with the storyline. (0.8/1)

Description : the description is good, telling about the plot and also the characters. It tells the reader about the plot and encourages to go ahead. (0.8/1)

About the story : the plot of the story is nice although cliche. Explain the settings and the characters along with his movements. These small details, enhance the imagination of the readers and interest them. Also since you are using texts as the conversation medium between the leads it is even more important that u tell about it's thoughts and the area around him.

Make the scenes a bit long, there is no need to rush .work on your grammar, it is very important, especially since you are writing a story.

Wishing you the best of luck (0.9/2)

Total score : (3.4/5)

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