Action/adventures: winter's edge

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Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372

Title. Winter's Edge

Author: Cephyr13

Action/Adventure

Title/Cover/Description:

The title is interesting, and mostly fits with the book. The cover is nice, and describes the story in a picture. The description is good, but I think it gives away a tad to much information, but, that's just my opinion.

4/5

Beginning/Details:

This story is very detailed and I like how it starts with a flashback. The first few chapters are very interesting and engaging. One suggestion is to describe Ian's powers a bit better.

4.3/5

Character Development:

I like the way Ian's character acts. His reactions to his powers are very good. Abby's character also develops well.

4.6/5

Plot:

Plot is engaging, flows nicely, and there are no big holes.

4.6/5

Grammer/Spelling:

There are a few Grammer mistakes that I noticed, not really any spelling though.

4/5

Overall: 4.3/5

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