Lucky ✔️

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Background info: You own a bakery in LA and on Sundays it is closed. You decided that every Sunday you would go explore abandoned things. When you are exploring, you record everything and post it on your very small YouTube channel. You only have 20 subs but you are very happy to have them.

Enjoy...

Finally today is Sunday! You finally get to go and explore the old school you found. You turn your camera on and start your video.
"What's up guys! It's y/n and welcome back to my video! Today I will be exploring this old school *You point behind you* it was an elementary school that shut down in 1935 and no one really knows why. Supposedly it is haunted so let's see what happens." You grab your camera and start to walk around. You spot your entrance.
"Ok so guys I have to get in that window *You point to the window* let's hope it's not a far drop in." You start to climb the wall and reach the window. When you peered in it looked like a 6 foot drop. You hop in and start walking around.
"So it looks like I'm in an auditorium. It isn't ruined or anything... it looks like everyone just... left. Ok this is weird. *Theres a thud outside* woah! What was that?" You're visibly scared but try to hide it. You start to walk down some hall and pass a bunch of lockers.
"Wow ok this so weird... ooooo I'm going to look in a locker. *You open a locker and a backpack falls out* ah! Oh gosh that scared me! Ok, so they left EVERYTHING. Why is there a backpack and a binder? *You start to look through the backpack when there is a thud and some whispers* I need to get out of here but whoever is here is where I came in." You grab the backpack and zip it. You put it on your back and start to walk as quiet as possible. You hear a few footsteps then trip on a book. You go tumbling to the ground and hear a gasp.
"Hello?" Someone calls out to you.
"Um... hi?" You call back while standing up and dusting your self off.
"Dude someone's here. We mean no harm." You hear him say to someone then to you.
"Um, yea me neither." You say very shakily. Two guys come through a doorway. One has brown hair and one has blonde hair. It takes you a second to realize, but finally you figure out, it's Sam and Colby.
"Oh my goodness! Sam and Colby?! This is so cool!" You squeal walking over to them.
"Uh, hi? You know us?" Sam replies while Colby just eyes you.
"Yea! You guys are my inspiration! When I was younger I watched your videos all the time. I still do. You are the reason I'm here, you inspired me to explore." You reply happily to them.
"We... inspired you?" Colby asks you.
"Yea! You guys are so cool! *You glance at your watch* Oh gosh it's late I should really go." You said while turning to walk away. "Wait" You stop walking and turn back around, "Can I get a picture with you?"
"Yea sure." Sam replies and Colby just keeps looking at you shocked, it was really confusing. You took a picture with them and started to walk away. You here Colby call after you, "Wait! We never got your name!" You turned around and shouted, "y/n".
"Beautiful name for a beautiful girl. Anyways, are you here alone?" He says with a little smile. You blush and look down then look back up.
"Thank you. And yes, I am alone. I explore alone all the time so it's no big deal."
"No big deal?? If it wasn't us you don't know who it could be! What if there was a gang or cult or someone who had bad intentions for you??"
"I'd run."
"Sometimes you can't outrun someone who is determined." He looks you dead in the eye.
"True, I guess I'm lucky it was you."
"I guess you were... well how about this, you start exploring with us?" He asks you and your eyes become wide.
"Me? Explore with you guys? That's crazy! And anyway I can only do it on Sundays... I have a bakery to run." You say absolutely bewildered.
"Sundays work." Sam nods agreeing with him, "We can explore with you on Sundays and you run your bakery every other day."
"Really?!" He nods. "I'd love to!!"

The End

So... what do you guys think??? Yes? No? Any suggestions? Should this be in 1st person instead (I, me, my) or stay in 2nd person? (You, your) I'm going to do 1st person for the next one.

-Smiles

(Edited)
I fixed it up! I'm gonna keep editing these.

-Smiles

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