Luke started to cry, his tears wetting his temples.
Uh, since when does Luke cry upside down? I'm pretty sure 'temples' wasn't the word you were looking for, because no. Just... Please, stop.
Honestly, in one of my favorite stories I saw this, and I brushed past it because it was my favorite story. The author could get away with murder and I'd be alright, as long as that story stayed up.
But, there was a story that was poorly written and just 'plz stop n go 2 english class', and it had that line in it and just... *bangs head on wall*
*Throws down pillow* Rain's done with you. *Stomps out*
YOU ARE READING
Stop. Just... Stop. (RANT BOOK)
RandomI just generally hate everything. "And I'm angry about everything all the time."
