Stop. Just... Stop. (RANT BOOK)

The Book That I Shouldn't Name

I don't want to name the book, because I'd rather not have little eleven year old fangirls attacking me when they shouldn't even know what that book is and they should be in bed. If you're easily offended, please do not read this rant.

I forced myself to read this. I regret it.

I have many problems with this book. First, many have said 'this book doesn't contain any abuse at all' when there is so much physical proof in the book itself that there is, indeed, a shit ton of abuse, both physical and verbal.

Second, 'there will be no link to certain celebrity this was a fanfiction of before it turned into a movie/book'. Really? Tell that to all of the news articles and the celebrity himself, because now a lot of people link him to your story.

Third, so many errors just in the first chapter that I couldn't. I tried to read the second chapter, and I quit half way through because it was just so unrealistic and I really disliked the book. Now, here's my views on certain parts of the first chapter. My words below are talking about certain parts of the chapter and so that's why it's choppy and the sentences seem unrelated. And, also, those were just my thoughts, I generally think like this when I'm reading books. Now >>
In a professional, real book, you don't use more than one exclamation point.
And if the sentence isn't trailing off, you use '...' not 2 periods or more than 3.
Girl, please, you have no say in whether or not your boyfriend's mother puts him into the school system a year late or not.
How bipolar is your mother, hot damn

Fourth, this statement> "I want the names to stay the same (for the book/movie)."
I'll let you process this before I add my imput...

Have you thought about it?

Did that sentence sink in?

Yeah?

Good.

Now here's what I think.

N.o.

*Screams, breaks computer* Rain doesn't want to offend anyone, but she doesn't like this book, and she doesn't like many things. *Walks away*

If this offends you, I am truly sorry.