Critisism :)

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Hey guys! Just wanted to ask you guys to voice your opinions if you guys have any suggestion on how to make my writing better. I'm obviously not a very experienced writing and would greatly appreciate it for the progression of this shitty story. Are things moving too fast, too slow? Lemme know .

Love you guys, thanks so much for the support! Much more to come.

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