I Won't Give Up- Jai Brooks Fanfiction

Chapter 27- Skin to Skin

Okay before I start this chapter, some people have been telling me how to write my fanfic and some people have said they don’t want me to do certain things with it. This chapter was written before I got those comments, so if this disappoints you I am sorry. But please don’t stop reading or voting because of this, this is how my fanfic will go! Just a quick warning this chapter contains mature content!
-Chels xo

Carter’s POV

I was standing in the middle of the lounge room on top of the coffee table with Jai next to me. The whole room was standing with us, just staring at what had happened. Chloe had said something that made me question Jai.

“Jai, I’d rather you tell me now.” I said trying to walk closer to him on that tiny table.

“It’s not important babe, just enjoy the night.” He replied with loving eyes. It made me forget, I can’t argue with him.

“Alright, well there’s something I need to tell you.” I said.

“Okay, what is it?” He quizzed.

“Um, meet me in Chloe’s bedroom.” I said.

“Ohhhh, you going to bang him Carter?” Some pricks yelled jokingly.

“Ha-ha, sorry to burst your bubble, but I already did.” I smirked walking up the stairs.

I turned into Chloe’s room and sat down on the bed. I patiently waited for Jai to follow and shortly he did. Jai sat down next to me and linked our hands. I turned to face him. Oh my, those big brown eyes, I could stare at them all day long, they are so dreamy and they glow in the light.

“What is it that you wanted to tell me?” He said.

“I think I’m ready to talk to you about what happened to my dad.” I said.

“You don’t have to.” Jai smiled.

“I want to.” I replied.

“Okay, go ahead.” He said.

I took a deep breath and spoke.

“I was only 10 years old when he left. My mum and he were arguing over something, I couldn’t hear what it was. But I was hiding in my room, because it was getting physical, they were pushing and hitting each other.”

“That’s awful.” Jai said, he was trying to comfort me because I was tearing up.

“I finally walked out of my room to try and stop it. But I walked out and my dad was trying to strangle my mum. I tried pulling him off of her but he pushed me off. He was screaming, until he had enough. He got off her and screamed again, he said something that hurt me and my mum.” I continued.

I don’t want you, or my daughter!

“And when he said that I cried and so did mum. Mum pushed him out of the house and slammed the door. My mum held me in her arms and we cried together. I didn’t understand much but I could understand enough.” I said. Tears were streaming down my face.

“I can’t believe that.” Jai said.

“And then an hour later, we got a call, saying that he had been hit by a car and died in hospital. It was the worst night of my life, but I’ve gotten over it a lot by telling you, and I’m glad you listened.” I smiled through my tears.

“Thank you for telling me, I’m glad you did.” He said placing his arm around me and pulling me into his chest.

“I have to tell you something else.” I said.

“Go ahead.”

“My mum got her old job back, back on the Gold Coast.” My tone dulled as I spoke.

“Are you going to move back?” He quizzed.

“I think my mum really wants to. But it all depends on if you want me to stay.” I looked up into his eyes.

“Of course I want you to stay but if you want to go, than I’m not going to stop you, it will make you happy, and I want nothing more than to see you smile.” Jai said.

“Thank you Jai, for understanding, because I think I’m going to go.” I replied.

“Just don’t forget about me.” He said pecking my lips.

“Never.” I said between breaths.

Jai continued to kiss me passionately and never broke the kiss. He kissed my jawline and intertwined his fingers in my hair. I felt and small moan escape my lips and he worked his way to my collarbones.

I started to unbutton his fancy shirt that he had worn just for me, as he unzipped the back off my dress, his hands feeling my bare back. I lay down and waited. He had and loving look on his face, the same look he had when we first did it. He took off his shorts and then I slid my dress off and chucked it to the floor. He straddled me and we kissed tenderly. Then he took off his boxers and I just stared at his perfect body, well it was perfect to me.

“I love you Jai.” I whispered.

“I love you to Carter.” Jai continued to kiss me.

Then I pulled him to me. He took off my bra and panties slowly and threw them across the room. He was on top of me again and he positioned himself to me.

“I’m going to miss you so much.” He whispered.

“I’ll miss you to.” I replied.

He slid himself into me. I moaned like crazy while clawing his back. He began to get faster. I could hear his short breaths. He said my name and I said his.

I flipped over so I was on top. I felt his strong hands on my waist and he starts to stroke my thighs. I kissed his neck as he still thrusted into me. I felt myself getting close until I screamed, as did Jai. I collapsed onto Jai’s chest. I rolled off to the side of the bed, breathless and happy. I slid under the duvet as did Jai. He put his arms around my body and squeezed me tightly. I closed my eyes and fell asleep in Jai’s warm tight grip.

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