Rants And Unavoidable Controversies

The Inbetweeners

Absolutely ridiculous.

Inbetweeners are writers who put author notes before, Inbetween or after paragraphs.

i.e

' He looked at her, seductively. (Omg Isn't he hot?) She bit onto her bottom lip and lured him in with her piercing green eyes. (I wish I were as sexy as her!!! *Cries*) '

Why do some writers do this? If you haven't come across such a writer than I'm glad because it's irritating and very distracting. Save your own comments for the end of the chapter. Stop throwing people off. How unprofessional could one possibly be?