Poor Descriptions

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Not captivating at all.

Some writers find it hard to lure readers so they either make the mistake of writing an entire scene from the book in the description or do this;

"This is a story about a girl named Dölerena who has a crush on Brett, the hottest guy in school! Dölerena goes through alot tbh because of Xavier the bad boy. And Bridget the popular girl bullys her because she likes Brett as well. It's very sad. I hope she ends up with Brett. Maybe she does!!!!!! ;) Or not ;_________; I CRY!!!!

ANYWAYS, READ AND FIND OUT <3
XOXO JEMMA!
LOVE YOU.
ONE LOVE.
WORLD PEACE.
END GLOBAL WARMING.
NOAH CENTINEO IS BAE."

Fin.

I can smell the eight grader in that description. If you can't think of anything proper to write then just put a captivating statement the MC said in the book or a quote or something. Save me the cringe.

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