Bloopers

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Hey! :3

Here are some bits of LAI that have been cut from the book, didn't quite make it, or made just for fun. I dunno, read this while you wait for mah announcement. Trololol.

1. First meeting Coral.

Coral was originally meant to meet Rosie when she came back from the Wonderbolts race way back. Soo here's the thing. It happened right after Rosie raced the Wonderbolts. She was also supposed to win on her own, but I decided to change that, too. Enjoy!

~le mid chapter~

I walk tiredly by Zoe. "Oh my gosh, you were SO cool! It's actually so amazing, you actually won!" She rambles.

"No, I didn't," I hiss, "If I wasn't so tired, Zoe, I swear I would kill you," I growl. That shuts her up.

Suddenly, I feel a small tug on my tail. I stop and turn around to see a little, cordial green pegasus filly with the curliest, most out of control deep blue mane I've ever seen. But the thing that I notice most are the large, wet, purple eyes she has. I'd've mistaken them for gems if I didn't know any better. She smiles at me nervously, playing with her hooves. "Um... excuse me, miss," she mumbles.

"Hi," I smile, "Are you lost?"

She shakes her head. "No, no. It's just... just... I saw you flying," she looks up at me.

I break into a cold sweat, blushing. "Yeah... what about it?" I mutter.

"Well... you're really good! It's amazing what you did, you beat all those Wonderbolts, even Soarin!" She squeals. "He's my favourite."

"Really? Mine, too!" I smile, "And thanks, but I'm sure there are better flyers than me," I sigh, referring to Rainbow Dash. But of course, she wouldn't know.

"Pfft, nah!" She cries, "That's why... I was wondering... if... maybe... you could teach me your stuff? Or at least how to fly?"

I consider this for a second. Do I really have time to mentor a kid? Well, yeah. But am I really responsible enough to mentor a kid? No, probably not.

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Sooo there's that.

*clears throat*

NEXT.

2. Hearts and Hooves Day.

One idea for a cute Roki moment for Hearts and Hooves Day was that Loki and Rosie'd spend the whole day together. But I thought the one I went with was cuter.

Also, Rosie comes off as a bit desparate in this, so I scrapped it.

I trot sadly into Loki's room, staring at the ground with my ears drooped. "Hey," I say blankly, doing a saddened sigh, blowing the hair out of my eyes. I slam my butt on the floor, slouching as I sit in front of the glass.

"Hello," Loki half smiles, putting his book down. He trots up to me, getting as close as he can. His face falls as he sits down, noticing my expression, "Why so glum?"

I sigh again, "Guess what today is?"

"Most of the time, I have no clue what time, month or year it is," he replies almost robotically.

I raise an eyebrow, staring up at him through my eyelashes. I shake my head, "No, today is Heart's and Hooves Day."

"Oh," I almost see a blush creep across Loki's face, but it must have been a trick of the eye, "Well... I'm not... particularly busy with that."

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