I like this story but I am thinking about rewriting it and changing a few things.
The prefect storyline. A lot of power these students have over other students and I cant help questioning why Rodger would send his son to such a place.
Maybe toning down Melinda and Christne. Honestly the original intention was for the dad to be the antagonist but it turned into Melinda and spiraled. Christine was suppose to be Parker's supporter but that changed.
Keep things with Rodger and his dealing with Parker. A lot of good drama there especially with Rodger's failings a father.
We will see.
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Parker
General FictionParker is a sixteen year old boy who lives with his strict father. He tries to be a good son but finds himself falling short. Will he learn to be the son that his father expects him to be.
