Wanna Hear About My Life?

Original story (Kind of important kind of not.)

So I have been working on something off of Wattpad that I probably want to post on here and probably not. Because I know original stories from fanfiction authors get a bad rep. But I want to know people's opinion on this story. It's a castaway/maroon story, but just a different story overall. The island, the language, and the clan are sort of made up. I emphasize sort of, because I'm using like different elements that already exist to create the island and the clan. Like the language is probably gonna be a mix of languages together like I can include Sanskrit, Hindi, French, English, etc. like a giant salad bowl of languages mixed together to create one. if anyone is good on languages and wants to help me out I would be more than happy.

Also the island, I'm still choosing a location but it's probably gonna be in the Indian Ocean or Pacific Ocean. Somewhere in that area, I mean the ocean is vast so.

Also these are all original characters, not like the "OC" thing you see in fan fiction but like the OC "OC". No names revealed yet because I have to come up with them. I also got to come up with a title.

So now I'm going to post the stuff I've written on here. I warn you it's only 1/4 of what I'm writing for the first chapter and it's 1.8 k words. So it's long...

Also if I put it on Wattpad it gives me a chance to use A. R Rahman's music as background music. Yay!

Here; main narration is a male character
A long silence...a view of nothing but black. Complete silence...craash...craash....

The sudden sound of waves bring in sounds and suddenly my senses are ringing. They work, and suddenly I'm brought back to life.

BOOOOOM!

A sudden gasp from the loud sound, I wake up to the surrounding blue sky and horribly blinding harsh light. My eyes glance sideways, but I only saw the azure sky. Suddenly I close them as the harsh light started giving me head pains. My arms and legs were lying useless, I tried moving them. But only my finger and toe or two would wiggle slightly. My body was in a pained, yet...it felt like it was asleep. Like someone injected a heavy medication in me, my body was lead but my head was light.

My brain started processing as I began to think once again. My brain told me to move, so I forced myself to listen. With a groan I lifted my limbs from the side, and began to push myself up slowly. My body pained more than I thought it did. I heaved deep breaths, letting out strained coughs as the process became very difficult. A lot more groans escaped me as I slowly began to process everything from my obscure senses. First, touch, my fingers felt around me feeling a loose and grainy substance. It felt familiar...it fell in between my fingers, little tiny graded rocks...sand. Next, smell, I could smell salt water through the air, as well as the smell of the sand. Which brought me to, hearing, I heard loud crashes. As well as the crisp sound of leaves in the whistle of the wind. So I assumed I was on a beach of some sort. I don't remember at all being on a beach. Finally, sight, my head turned around slowly as I observed. Yellow, white sand, the blue green ocean, and the green of many trees leading to a jungle or forest.

I calculated everything, and it finally clicked. I was marooned. Then the next part of the process began as questions started piling up one by one. How did I get marooned? Where even am I? Wait...what was my name again? Suddenly my brain became a pile of mush as I felt around myself in a panic. I don't remember. I hyperventilated as I tried to think harder...bits and pieces of my life were there, except most of the important things were gone. Vanished like they were never there. I turned to full on panic, everything in me became chaos. Breathing became hard as I wracked my hands through my hair and my fingernails dug deep into my scalp, like I wanted to crack my skull open to check my brain.I felt like passing out again. But what good would that do me? Perhaps give me a peaceful death, because I was sure to die here. Through my panic, out of the corner of my eye I spotted something. Something white.