Hey guys it's been haunting my dreams how the ending sucks ass so I've been thinking of rewriting it. I can't say Loui will survive, and I apologize for that. But there is still a chance that he might. I need all of you guys' help on this. Comment on this part how you think the story should have ended and I'll make it happen. Let's make this shit not so fucking cringe. Also planning on re doing the title because god damn what the ffffffffff.....
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Revolution (I'm still working on it because yikes)
RomanceLoui and Rose are star crossed lovers in revolutionary America. The two can't help but admit their love is unconventional, on account of them being maid and master, but they also cannot deny that their love is undying for one another. When Loui is s...