Revolution (I'm still working on it because yikes)

Chapter ten (Rose)

     Rose followed Loui to his bedroom and stopped at the door, her heart wrenching. She had waited for a kiss like that for such a long time, she couldn't believe that the chances of seeing him again were now slim. She grabbed his hand. "L-Loui......." he turned to her.
"Rose....."
"I-I love you....."
"I love you too....." he pulled her into the bedroom. She held his hands.
"I-I want to ask something of you......"
"Of course my love.....anything...." His voice was a soft whisper as he pulled her closer.
"If you are to join the revolution......I-I want you to make me yours....." she put her hand on his chest, her heart beating so fast it must've been audible. His eyes widened a little.
"Y-you mean........you want to....have sex with me.....?" Rose shyly nodded, feeling embarrassed. Her cheeks were bright red. He blinked. "I-I......." He couldn't say anything more. She looked up at him. His face was red too.
"J-just for tonight.....before you're married.....before you go off to war......" she tugged at his shirt. He grabbed her waist.
"We can't tell anyone....."
"I know......" He passionately kissed her, pulling her body against his. She squeaked and kissed back, cupping his face with her hands.
     Pretty soon the kiss escalated. Hands ventured to places hands should not go without permission, tongues fought violently, hips ground against hips. Clothes started to be peeled off until there was nothing left to peel. Loui kissed her in a way that made her whole body shiver. In the beginning she asked him to be gentle, but by the end of their love making she was begging him not to stop. She drowned her cries and moans into a pillow so no one would hear. Half her body was hanging off the side of the bed while she was railed from behind. They came together.
     The next morning came after what seemed like an eternity. Rose opened her eyes, feeling Loui's strong arms around her waist, hugging her. His light snoring was muffled by a pillow. She ran her fingers through his hair. He opened one eye and yawned. "Mmmm....what time is it?"
"I don't know.....early....."
"Ok......" he hugged her tighter, still loony from sleep. "You're pretty....." she laughed a little.
"I'm glad you think so after what happened last night......" Their necks were covered with hickeys. "I'd never done that before......." she rolled over to face him. He gently pet her cheek.
"Me neither......it was nice......" he sat up and stretched. "It's early enough for you to get into your room without anyone noticing you leaving mine." He looked down at her. She yawned widely and sat up next to him, holding the covers of the bed in front of her bare chest.
"I don't want to leave you......"
"I'm sorry.......I wish I could stay......I'm not being forced to go but.....I feel morally obligated to......"
"You're going to help free our country from the British......it's a noble reason...." he nodded and got out of bed. She looked at him and blushed. He slowly got dressed. She did the same after a short moment.
     After kissing him on the cheek she went to her own room and laid down. The sun filtered through her window. Realizing she would start her menstrual cycle soon, she groaned.

(OR WILL SHE????? DUN DUN DUUUUUUUNNNNNNN!!!!:0)