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Beautiful Chaos Review

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Beautiful Chaos

The_Dark_Poet

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JacquelineIZ

The opening of the book, according to me, is good. I like that you started with a copyright chapter and stated that this was your property so that it reduces chances of your book being stolen.

Vocabulary

I will be honest, I can't say anything about the Vocabulary if you have only posted your copyright chapter (it is the only chapter posted at the time of reading.) So, nothing to say about that.

Grammar

Your grammar is okay, but there are mistakes, which is not good since if the opening chapter has issues, it will quite frankly put off a reader. I noticed that your formatting was a bit off. Specially, the part that you made the © and ® appear. It looked a bit out.

Summary

Well, I love the quote used. Its thought provoking and very interesting. But I feel as if you should give a little more detail, You know? Give the reader a little insight of what's coming. Make them want to push the read button. Prepare them for what's coming. You can't just put a quote and expect it to explain the whole book, that may work with short stories but not Fantasy.

Cover

Seems fine. The front was a bit off, but not too noticeable. Pretty good. I like the model used. The dark theme went really well with the whole genre.

And to answer your two questions,

Yes, the names sound amazing, very stylish.

Yes, I do think that it is the right genre.

Note: The review book this is for offers several options. To review only grammar and sentence structure. To review only character development and plot. To review only vocabulary and descriptions. Or, the requester can ask for all of this to be reviewed. There are two options when making this request – for it to be sugar-coated or not.

This review is for it all to be touched on (not sugar-coated).